Breaking Heart

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By chuckbl

A Breaking Heart


Would that I might curl up and die,

Behind closed doors, lie down and cry.

A broken heart that plagues my soul,

An endless torment that takes its toll.


The nights seem long with lack of sleep,

The days longer, with no company to keep.

My heart is empty, there's nothing left for me,

Broken into pieces, smothering me constantly.


True love, God's greatest gift of all,

Led me blindly to the edge, made me fall.

Now there is no one here left to tell,

Of how I am tormented in this hell!


There is no help for a breaking heart,

There is no tool to make it restart.

What song can I sing to ease my mind?

Is there some remedy I have yet to find?


No, there is nothing for people like me.

Lonlieness, suffering are the only things free.

Each day is a torment I must undergo,

Each night, her vision, I can't overthrow.


Her eyes, her scent, her waiving hair,

Her smile, her frown, her body bare,

There is nothing to her that I can compare,

Nothing that is so beautiful and rare.


Love can be kind and Love can be cruel.

But I have been taken for Love's greatest fool.

So now I stand alone, in a small dark room,

With only memories and tears to share my gloom.


Goodbye sweet love, goodbye broken heart.

I shall weep for you no longer, you have torn me apart.

So let the fires take me, let the flames burn me,

I care not anymore, I have set my soul free.



© Chuckbl - Hubpages - www.moonproject.co.uk

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Chineze 2 months ago

Beautifully expressed. Loved reading it.

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natori1 3 months ago

Describing a broken heart sometimes can be hard to describe as one go through pain. But you did a good job on bringing the pain to paper as a release method. Well job! Keep the words flowing.

Natori1

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chuckbl Hub Author 4 months ago

Hi Ytsenoh, Poetic Fool, thanks for commenting, I agree Poetic, you can never really express how it feels with words but hopefully I have made a decent attempt, and Ytsenoh, I am sorry to hear that, it is probably the most awful thing, I hope you find comfort and the right path. Good luck. :)

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Poetic Fool Level 7 Commenter 4 months ago

This really is one of the better attempts at describing a broken heart that I have read. You're to be commended. Many know what it feels like but few can put it into words. Voted up and awesome.

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ytsenoh Level 7 Commenter 4 months ago

I'm dealing with this subject right now after my 11 year relationship ended last night. I was therefore happy to read this for some kind of healing purpose. Thank you.

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chuckbl Hub Author 4 months ago

Thanks Daniella, I am glad you liked it.

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Daniella Lopez Level 5 Commenter 4 months ago

So sad yet so beautiful. Absolutely loved it. You've captured the feeling of a broken heart. Voted up!

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